tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9213897889308632008.post1290780472312304754..comments2023-09-05T06:19:16.586-06:00Comments on It was Late, and I was Tired.: You Are A Bittersweet Onion.Juice Boxhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09837338430052033735noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9213897889308632008.post-72657884672917604422010-12-01T17:07:23.774-07:002010-12-01T17:07:23.774-07:00There is no "right" in the sense of your...There is no "right" in the sense of your question, Juice. There is only the rightness of your thoughts, your feelings, your words. Believe in your instinct and your ability - they won't betray you. This onion poem has a huge message. You did good again. :)<br /><br />PS - loved your poems in the Poem's United Poem of the Week. Huzzah!Zouxzouxhttp://www.zouxzoux.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9213897889308632008.post-12017957093684062122010-11-29T21:04:08.252-07:002010-11-29T21:04:08.252-07:00Good stuff JB. By the way, nothing is polished, cl...Good stuff JB. By the way, nothing is polished, clean, and perfect. Nothing.Human Paradoxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14298152454302764517noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9213897889308632008.post-80959248304236244712010-11-29T19:43:52.089-07:002010-11-29T19:43:52.089-07:00nicely done, the thought it puts to mindnicely done, the thought it puts to mindAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9213897889308632008.post-10948007532543468402010-11-29T17:19:38.938-07:002010-11-29T17:19:38.938-07:00Love the pondering in this piece....keep on writin...Love the pondering in this piece....keep on writing Juice Box!!! :-)Carrie Van Hornhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11715648073882529202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9213897889308632008.post-40570734030033883802010-11-29T14:25:58.577-07:002010-11-29T14:25:58.577-07:00I like the simple, sweet, zen feeling of this as w...I like the simple, sweet, zen feeling of this as well. Hidden in all our memories are bittersweet stories to tell. :o)<br /><br /><a href="www.%20rhymemeasmile.blogspot.com/2010/11/poor-randy-boy.html" rel="nofollow">Rhyme Me a Smile</a>Rachel Hoythttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12565668664072704971noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9213897889308632008.post-66908278804646889472010-11-29T12:26:05.912-07:002010-11-29T12:26:05.912-07:00The question at the end made it for me. It actuall...The question at the end made it for me. It actually got me thinking, and the best kind of poetry makes you think.Taylorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03284463155270325531noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9213897889308632008.post-18221719384189519332010-11-28T18:01:00.398-07:002010-11-28T18:01:00.398-07:00This is Zen like. Glad you shared it with us. To y...This is Zen like. Glad you shared it with us. To your question: it doesn't get different as you get older. Part of the human experience!The Square Cornerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10942354729937177275noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9213897889308632008.post-3847102896585845882010-11-28T15:46:02.932-07:002010-11-28T15:46:02.932-07:00Nice work J.B. Skillz as always!Nice work J.B. Skillz as always!Brother Olliehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07506492407482879487noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9213897889308632008.post-78828356001713657472010-11-28T13:49:28.401-07:002010-11-28T13:49:28.401-07:00Simple but a profound question at the end makes it...Simple but a profound question at the end makes it a bigger piece than it looks. Nicely done.G.K. Asantehttp://seenmissing.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9213897889308632008.post-62734942846722768932010-11-28T12:47:42.253-07:002010-11-28T12:47:42.253-07:00I like this, concise and to the point. Nice. :-)I like this, concise and to the point. Nice. :-)Paul Andrew Russellhttp://www.paulandrewrussell.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9213897889308632008.post-23834030664772464982010-11-28T12:37:52.608-07:002010-11-28T12:37:52.608-07:00Nicely done. Brings to mind the style of William C...Nicely done. Brings to mind the style of William Carlos Williams.Philip Thrifthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03021615111948806998noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9213897889308632008.post-26170864064162829432010-11-28T11:19:12.052-07:002010-11-28T11:19:12.052-07:00don't forget to link some of your poems to pot...don't forget to link some of your poems to potluck tonight,<br />Happy Sunday!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9213897889308632008.post-57331668879057068292010-11-28T11:19:04.892-07:002010-11-28T11:19:04.892-07:00no need of course,
especially you, you can make it...no need of course,<br />especially you, you can make it perfect with the first try.<br /><br />lovely piece, enjoy the wit in it.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com