Pull me from
this concussive state.
I can't see straight
I don't want to
and I won't look you
in the eye,
because when I do
I see trails of smoke
a fading line
of what we used to be.
I see stars
spangled and caught
row on row in symmetry
and I'm lost in it all
and my head pounds.
It still pounds.
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the repetition really nails it down JB
ReplyDeleteReally great with the emotion and slight edge of desperation.
ReplyDeletevery cool. We gotta song here.
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