"The desert bears only a scathing sun, and nothing more."
"What about mirages?"

Sunday, September 11, 2011

Leaky Faucet - Haiku.

A single drip
complete silence.

- - -

I think I'm getting sick. :(

In other news, I saw Maroon 5 in concert yesterday. They were awesome! The sound quality was good and the actual performing was sleek and nice to watch. Good concert experience in general.


  1. nice haiku - keep it tight and simple, be well

  2. Sickness sucks, usually just means we need to lay low for a bit. Great Haiku - you should write more of those. Feel better JB.

  3. Wow, that’s an amazing haiku! I remember writing one at school and counting every syllable of the words so it fits a particular pattern. Yours is short, but the words you chose were perfect to convey the effect you want to achieve. I can almost imagine the sound a drip makes in the dead of the night with your composition.


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