Her eyes cut through me.
A hot blade through cold butter.
Her eyes gut punch me.
A hammer to the head of a nail.
Her hands still hold me.
An anchor clinched around coral.
Her hands move through me.
An automatic rifle kicking out after firing.
I don't know if she knows.
I want her to want me.
I see that she sees
her special effect is affecting me.
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damn fine gritty imagery JB
ReplyDeletedamn fine gritty imagery JB
ReplyDeletegreat one...you can feel the words...and what they mean.
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