Walking circles
in cool march air.
Crumbling ice
cracking into slush
under feet that long
to get wet.
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God! I hate wet cold feet! Great poem look forward to many more from you.
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The worst kinds walk - carcking into slush is a great line.
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i want my feet to get wet, too.
ReplyDeletelove this image!