In the chill march air,
I'm haunted by dreams of you.
I see your face
behind every tree,
and beneath every stone.
Even though
the stagnant winter air
has warmed
and faded,
your imprint still chills my bones.
- - -
I think I discovered a neat trick to writing poetry. Listen to awesome heavy metal, and say the whole thing out loud.:)
I really like this one, though writing it made me want to cry. I guess I was just thinking about things that have happened in my life. Not really recent things that I try to force down, and like a jack in the box, they keep springing up. This piece is really about one individual that still remains apart of my life, and try as I might, I cannot deny the impact that this person has had on me.
Many are really quite negative, some are positive. Some I just don't understand. But whatever. Do you know someone like this?
And just a few comments on The Moon Thief. I loved the way it turned out, from the starting sentance to the closing one. Once again, I was listening to the band Cynic when I wrote it, and I dunno, I guess Metal just makes me think. I need to put more on my Ipod. I think I might add more as time goes on, but first I have to work out a few kinks in the storyline.
And BTW, new boyfriends rock. ;P
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