Your words
are a ululation
where 'joke'
and 'jab'
are interchangeable.
I imagine
you think yourself
smoke,
so swift
and ghostly grey
that you slip through
my nascent understanding
like pale
and dead cold fingers.
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I credit inspiration for this poem to Jenna Butler, who is a poet based here in the Edmonton area. Only in my most wild and highly absurd dreams can I write like her.
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cool flow.
ReplyDeleteyour talent truly impress.
Your poetry scans nicely, I like the smoke imagery here, glad you decided to join Poets United.
ReplyDeleteFantastic writing! And hey, another Canuck, eh? (I live on Vancouver Island). Welcome aboard. I look forward to reading more of your work.
ReplyDeleteA nice weave of imagery. Welcome to the Poets United.
ReplyDeleteAwesome writing, JB. Like I told you before, you must keep this up!!
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