He grinned
a staggered grin.
Thoughts and tremors
left unsaid.
But they show--
plain as day,
dank as night--
in half hidden
teeth.
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Poetry, Prose, and Thoughts for the mentally exhausted, the morally intrigued, and the late night internet surfer hopped up on caffine. For you with strained eyes, a tired soul, and rhythm in your heart.
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Ooooh. I like this... Love and Light, Sender
ReplyDeleteA great portrait in words. Very descriptive.
ReplyDeleteWell done!
ReplyDeleteNicely done.
ReplyDeleteGlad to see you're on Poets United!!
ReplyDeleteA very strong image with your words. A rather scary grin!
ReplyDeleteBest wishes, Eileen
I am now following your blog........
You do good work J.B. - keep getting it out there.
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