"The desert bears only a scathing sun, and nothing more."
"What about mirages?"

Sunday, October 17, 2010

Missing Northern Lights.

A lightless sky,
where have the Northern Lights gone?
I can't see where the water starts,
or where the trees bend,
or when the night begins.
All because of
a lightless sky.

8 comments:

  1. I see the lightless sky in your work.
    well put.

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  2. You have captured "lightlessness" very well:) Good work!

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  3. I just posted a poem with the imagery of bending trees!! Awesome coincidence!!! You are good, JB. Keep up this poetry thing. I always like your work.

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  4. ...a lightless sky...

    ...I like that line...cool indeed. (^_^)

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  5. Great flow here. A keeper for sure.

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  6. I agree with Uma... simple and elegant. Love and Light, Sender

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