"The desert bears only a scathing sun, and nothing more."
"What about mirages?"

Tuesday, November 30, 2010

Last Bit O' Sun.

Smells like
a dry winter
out there.
Snow glistens
in grey light,
and empty branches
grab at the last
weak rays of sun
like hungry hands.

5 comments:

  1. "Empty Branches...like hungry hands". I hope you know that is excellent writing. Such a good job.

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  2. A cool description here. Made me shiver.

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  3. Oh, totally know that feeling. Roll on the winter solstice!

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  4. Very well crafted..!!
    keep Writing My Dear.. :)

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  5. Glad to Land at your fantastic poetry land today,
    How are you?

    Love your poetry talent, Please join us at Jingle Poetry Monday potluck today,
    First time participants can link in 1 to 3 old poems, poems unrelated to our theme are welcome!

    Happy Tuesday/Wednesday!
    Hope to see you in.
    xxx

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