I fell into
deep dark
sleep;
Another night
without you.
I guess that's
okay--
it only
makes me
treasure you
more,
like the last green
of a yellowing
world.
Tomorrow maybe
I'll see that face
that makes
spring buds
sprout anew.
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I love this very positive poem......."like the last green of a yellowing world" and "that face that makes spring buds sprout anew." Wonderfully written!
ReplyDeleteAnother cool poem - gnarly new pic J.B.
ReplyDeleteNice JB. Hurtful but hopeful. A real place to be.
ReplyDeleteEnjoy how you display your thoughts...I'm with Sherry...like the last green of a yellowing world is a killer line...nicely done.
ReplyDeleteAh, I read this and felt sad, but only because my partner is missing this evening, so I got a personal response to your words.
ReplyDeleteI love the witty title.
original work.
ReplyDeletewithout you,
i value you more...
love this.
divine poetry.
welcome linking in a poem to our potluck today, Thanks in advance!
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I love this sweet little poem. Slightly despairing, but a nice conclusion, with a hopeful sigh!
ReplyDeleteBest wishes, Eileen
"...like the last green of a yellowing world."
ReplyDeleteWow! That will stay with me for a while.
love the green yellow...the hope of spring...life has many springtimes...enjoy your writing...bkm
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