There's a metro;
a labyrinth of cities
lying in the
cracks and gaps
of your lips.
I see the cobbled streets
of Paris,
the neverending skyscrapers
of New York,
the gray of too many faces
in Bangladesh.
I wonder
how many have
been explored
and how many
I have yet to
see.
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I edited this while posting it. It was originally much shorter and made less sense. With the addition of the second stanza, I think I shaped it more to what I had in mind for the piece.
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Crazy poem J.B. - what a vision.
ReplyDeleteGreat stuff mate, great idea and well constructed.
ReplyDeleteI can tell you are young, because of the tiny size of type face you use for the text! Next time, have a thought for us Oldies whose eyes are not quite up to scratch, eh? LOL
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